Sunday, October 23, 2005
One more thing on my mind, I'd like to ask . . . does this work as a poem, do you think? (The ellipses-looking parts are supposed to be white space, just forgot how to do so in html). I keep going back and forth, I can't decide.
The Lost Eye
lapses . . . I can’t see
lapidarily titillates . . . I can’t see
lists, the breeze . . . believes
it has . . . alone, without me,
it, can see . . . alone, without me
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lapidarily titillates doesn't exactly roll off my tongue, but I think this is wonderful, evocative, haunting.
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