Friday, January 27, 2006
Just wanted to note that the motion through these lines (which end a poem by Joanne Kyger quoted by Ron Silliman today),
When he dropped us off in the city
He took just one very shapely branch
& left us on the sidewalk
with this huge mound
of drooping greenery and blossoms
and drove away into the night
, especially the weight and pause of and around the fourth here quoted, is wholly admirable.
When he dropped us off in the city
He took just one very shapely branch
& left us on the sidewalk
with this huge mound
of drooping greenery and blossoms
and drove away into the night
, especially the weight and pause of and around the fourth here quoted, is wholly admirable.
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