Thursday, April 06, 2006



What could explain
but the obvious
my words
the obvious obviates
not explained things

but the explanation
shines it thinks
in its own daily arc
the shadows too are a sort of heliotrope though
hope for less

Nice poem!

Strange but satisfying.
good that there's no punctuation
but "Ceremony" is capitalized.

good line breaks

I like this.

(would make a good calendar poem
good poem to encounter and contemplate before walking about in the workaday world)

is music to my ear.
Lorna, Josh, thanks, that's heartening to hear.
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