Thursday, April 06, 2006
Ceremony
What could explain
but the obvious
my words
the obvious obviates
not explained things
shines it thinks
in its own daily arc
the shadows too are a sort of heliotrope though
hope for less
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good that there's no punctuation
but "Ceremony" is capitalized.
good line breaks
I like this.
(would make a good calendar poem
good poem to encounter and contemplate before walking about in the workaday world)
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but "Ceremony" is capitalized.
good line breaks
I like this.
(would make a good calendar poem
good poem to encounter and contemplate before walking about in the workaday world)
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